From: owner-jewel-digest@smoe.org (jewel-digest) To: jewel-digest@smoe.org Subject: jewel-digest V2 #323 Reply-To: jewel@smoe.org Sender: owner-jewel-digest@smoe.org Errors-To: owner-jewel-digest@smoe.org Precedence: bulk jewel-digest Thursday, May 1 1997 Volume 02 : Number 323 Today's Subjects: ----------------- NJC Urgent Free Tara Maclean concert [gegertha@tiac.net (Chris Snyder)] FG VIDEO SCRIPT UPDATE #3.5 [Brian Day ] NJC: for those who have no clue what my REAL name is! [That Little Voice ] NJC: Ahhhhhhh! [Jaime ] JC: Surrounded by Jewel [earthsis@spindle.net (earthsis@spindle.net)] ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: Wed, 30 Apr 1997 23:38:27 -0400 (EDT) From: gegertha@tiac.net (Chris Snyder) Subject: NJC Urgent Free Tara Maclean concert Hi Angels I finally got all the info. This Sunday there is going to be an almost all day free concert in Harvard Sq. In Cambridge MA. Right next to Harvard. This is a FREE concert celebrating the coming of Spring. The line up is to include Somebody's Sister, starting at noon, (actual name of the band) Laurie Seargent (a friend of Patty Griffin), Merrie Amsterburg, (a wonderful local artist of the singer songwriter genre), 2 as of yet unamed artists, and the wonderful magnificent Tara Maclean 4pm . The concert is going to be held in front of the HMV. I would love if I heard from some of you that you are coming. There will be over 25 international food vendors, over 50 craft vendors with many multicultural gifts, and 15 street performers, not to mention the lure of Harvard Sq. in the Spring. I know many of you probably have other plans or just want to spend the day outside with someone special now that the weather has become very nice in the northeast. But what better way to spend the day than food, music, and EDAs. I'll end now since I know many of you have other things much more important than reading my post but I just want to say I would love to see some of the NE area EDAs pulll together the way we did a couple of weeks ago. Talk to you soon. Chris Snyder PS I found out today that this Friday Patty Griffin will be performing at the Bull Run Restaurant in Saugus MA. Hope some of you can make it. It should be a wonderful intimate show. ------------------------------ Date: Wed, 30 Apr 1997 23:41:20 -0400 From: Brian Day Subject: FG VIDEO SCRIPT UPDATE #3.5 I'M SO SORRY, I forgot to add the 2nd updated script section Okay, so far so good... ...we've gotten suggestions from a couple people, and I haven't = conversed with Julie yet, but I believe everyone will like these = suggestions. They come from two wonderfully helpful EDAs so far, Naveen = Rao, and That Little Voice Inside Your Head (Name not disclosed for = unsureness if I should). Suggestions shall be posted in order as they happen in the video. Suggestion 1 / Naveen Rao : *** ORGINAL SCRIPT SECTION *** She moves to the front door, slowly opening it. He hears the dull squeak = of the hinge. Turning around still on his knees, he opens his arms = begging for her forgiveness. All you see is his mouth obviously = stumbling, trying to utter out words of apology. He moves to the front = porch, around three feet away form Jewel he stops. He again opens his = arms and she knocks them away. She raises her arm in front of her, turns = her arm over and opens her palm. Revealing a dime which she forces him = to take. (The significance is this, the dime says "Call someone who = cares honey, you've hurt me to badly this time!") SUGGESTION : Naveen feels that it would be better that Jewel instead of = knocking his arms away she should just push them down with a = disappointed look on her face. It takes away the harshness (Which I = admit does not suit Jewel), and adds to the "You've hurt me to bad this = time!" Feeling.=20 EDITOR'S NOTE : I believe that this is a VERY valid point and a great = suggestion. Please read the following updated Script Section to validate = the content change. Thanks, and keep up the good work!! Oh yeah, and = thanks for correcting me on the iris, not the retina. =3D) *** UPDATED SCRIPT SECTION *** She moves to the front door, slowly opening it. He hears the dull squeak = of the hinge. Turning around still on his knees, he opens his arms = begging for her forgiveness. All you see is his mouth obviously = stumbling, trying to utter out words of apology. He moves to the front = porch, around three feet away form Jewel he stops. He again opens his = arms and she slowly pushes them down away from her, a look of lost love = in her face. She raises her arm in front of her, turns her arm over and = opens her palm. Revealing a dime which she forces him to take. A camera = shot of a zoom in of the dime (Head Side) that is clear, which the focus = changes to see his confused face of awe behind it. (The significance is = this, the dime says "Call someone who cares honey, you've hurt me to = badly this time!") Suggestion 2 / TLVIYH <--I think we know who this is. =3D) *** ORIGINAL SCRIPT SECTION *** Her hand clenches ever so slowly into the sign language symbol for "I = love you." Camera pans around to her face, still holding a saddened = look. More tears are rolling down her cheeks, not balling, but = continuous. The camera zooms in on her right eye, but the weird part is = that her iris is in color, the color of Jewel's marvelously Emerald = eyes, the rest is ALL b & w . A single tear swells up and rolls slowly = down, with lightning softly flashing the scene fades to black.... SUGGESTION : TLVIYH feels that an added part of Jewel tracing a raindrop = on it's course from the top of the window to the bottom with her "I love = you" hand would add effect. EDITOR'S NOTE : Great! I love this, we are 2 for 2 on suggestions so = far. I believe this adds an effect of not only visual loss, but shows = that she is longing to hold on, she wants to keep with her man, but = cannot because unfortunately everything has an end, including the = raindrop's trail. Thanks for the input, we hope to see more!! =3D) *** UPDATED SCRIPT SECTOIN *** Her hand clenches ever so slowly into the sign language symbol for "I = love you." Jewel also traces a lone raindrop on the window from top to = bottom of the window pane, still longing for more, but realizes = everything must end. The camera pans around to her face, still holding a = saddened look. More tears are rolling down her cheeks, not balling, but = continuous. The camera zooms in on her right eye, but the weird part is = that her iris is in color, the color of Jewel's marvelously Emerald = eyes, the rest is ALL b & w . A single tear swells up and rolls slowly = down, with lightning softly flashing the scene fades to black.... Well people, that is how it will be done. Detailed and very personal. = Everyone gets their credit, no one is left out. I will post a message = following this that will have the TOTAL repost of the video script with = updated sections.=20 The subject will be "FG VIDEO SCRIPT UPDATE REPOST #3" ------------------------------ Date: Wed, 30 Apr 1997 21:12:44 -0700 From: That Little Voice Inside Your Head Subject: NJC: for those who have no clue what my REAL name is! My Name Is Lora heehee full name given to me is Lora "Yogurt" Brown with an E heehee :) okies everyone I am so bored I wanna talk to someone from the Jewel list heehee anyone wanna call, gimme a e-mail back if so! Love all you edas!!! Love, Lora "Yogurt" Brown With An E ------------------------------ Date: Thu, 01 May 1997 00:21:50 -0400 From: Jaime Subject: NJC: Ahhhhhhh! I need people's help fast! I was planning on attending the Lilith Fair concert in Seattle (well, at the Gorge) on July 5th. I'm from Vancouver, BC and was planning on making it a weekend trip. I talked to my parents tonight and they said NO. I was planning on going with my best friend, she'll be 20 and i'll be 20 later that month. How do I convince them to let me go???? Tix go on sale on Saturday, so I'm in desperate need of a solution! Thanks! Jaime (a procrastinating angel) ------------------------------ Date: Wed, 30 Apr 1997 23:39:31 -0500 From: earthsis@spindle.net (earthsis@spindle.net) Subject: JC: Surrounded by Jewel Hi all, Not that this is news worthy or flip your world over exciting, but I thought it was kinda neat. I received my Tiny Lights Tour Book in the mail Monday (thank you Mr.BB!). I was on my way out the door, so I brought my mail with me . I got in my car, dumped a pile of junk mail on the seat and anxiously opened my package.. Suddenly I was holding the tourbook...ahh. I decided to turn on the radio while I looked through it. YWMFM had just started on the radio station the stereo was on...Hmm..coincidence? :) See, neat! :) Take care, Angela~*~* ------------------------------ End of jewel-digest V2 #323 ***************************